May Live Critiques – Submit Your Blender Art!

[Cookie Dough]

@pako974
If you wanted, you could make so some of the wood in the background has knots and holes in it. You can make so there is a piece of wood that’s like half way broken. Also, if they have tires, and a tree, you can make the tree a little bit thicker and make a tier swing. You could but the swing on the branch that is facing towards the camera.

[Jonathan Lampel]

@baukepost Here’s the file I was messing with earlier, hope that helps!

http://pasteall.org/blend/index.php?id=49506

[Bauke Post]

@jlampel Awesome, thanks!

[Bauke Post]

@dostovel If  you’d still want to make some materials for it, that would be amazing :). You can have the model as long as you credit me if you posted it anywhere.

[Omar Domenech]

@baukepost Sure, I’d like to practice getting it as close to as the photo of the real life controller. 

[Jonathan Lampel]

Also on a fun note, I made my working playlist public since we talked about it in the chat: https://open.spotify.com/user/1264419378/playlist/6RN7ZLeVepbJQwU2NCKLvp?si=AW2Ao8JnSfyfBlMYeOQOUQ

[plasmavoyage]

Cool stream once again! 🙂

See ya next week.

[galledark]

My very first human head:    https://skfb.ly/6yUpL

I made this by following the course “Blender Mesh Modeling Bootcamp” of Jonathan Lampel.
I tried to model it by my own with the course as a support rather than copy the instructor to get the exact same result at the end.

And here is the result… This human thing… witch looks like a doll or an android ^^’.
I know there is a LOT of mistakes, the proportions aren’t good, and i’m not very aware about human anatomy…

My goal is to be able to model Anything
What advice can you give me to improve myself at modeling in general?

Ps: i HIGHLY recommand this course to people who wants to improve, i was definitly unable to make this the last week !

[William Miller]

That’s how I follow courses!  I watch a lesson, then try to do what the instructor did.

[Brandon Ruffin]

Yellow Spring (Critique)

I found some extra time and made this simple scene. Took me about 3 days to make in total, but only on my free time throughout the week.

I tried to achieve the early morning mood of being on a hike or some travels, and spotting these beautiful yellow flowers as the sun start to creep over the peak of the horizon.

Always looking to improve, so tear my heart out with some critiques, if you so desire!

[William Miller]

@bruffin776 That’s really good…

[Brandon Ruffin]

@williamatics

Oh thank you! I appreciate that!

[galledark]

@williamatics Glad to know i’m not the only one to do this ^^

[Aaron Rudderham]

@jlampel Gonna have fun merging that playlist into mine, can never get enough Muse.

[Simon Buz]

Hello, I was doing homework for modeling a house exercise. My goal was to be as close to photo realistic result as I  can be but last critique session is coming so fast… I know I have problems with shaders like glass and roof and need more stuff to appear the environment more livable. At the moment I would like to get critique on composition/camera especially as I took for my project very wide plan of a house and I am forced to make very wide renders witch, to my eyes, are not the best thing but if I go to more square renders I get a lot of free space below/above the model and this feels not right too.

Thanks for advices!

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