May Live Critiques – Submit Your Blender Art!
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I was going for a Disney meets High Fashion look. Basically something appealing but also “unique”.
I’d like to work in the Industry one day, so a honest critique is very welcome!! 🙂
(the link to my project also has a mini turnaround animation)https://cgcookie.com/u/rostzwiebel/projects/02-character
(and here is just the sculpt) https://cgcookie.com/u/rostzwiebel/projects/character-02
Here’s my entry for critiquing. I’m going for realism with the chair. I threw this together at the last minute. I actually wanted to put it in an outdoor scene. I’ll do that later. I know the lighting is horrible, but I’ll get better with that. 
A friend was talking about the flowers she picked for her wedding yesterday and I got inspired and made this image. It is peony jewelry, a set of earrings and a pendant ready for 3D printing. My goal with the image is to display the jewelry in an attractive and realistic way. I’m happy with how the image turned out, but not that happy about the jewelry itself due to the required minimal wall thickness for printing. Or as my boyfriend told me after the first version: ‘it could also be lettuce’.
I am planning on entering the “Goo Monsters” Weekly CG Challenge. Naturally, I decided to try to make a realistic goo material before I started working on my entry. I would like some advice about the material.
I used a mix between a subsurface scattering shader and a refraction shader. Suzanne has a displacement modifier with a cloud texture.
Hello guys, i made witch so now i need some feedback =)
I made this character after i did some tuttorials and wanted do something my self.
Hello everyone. Hopefully this isn’t too late to post for the next stream.
This is a WIP from the Stylized Character Class. I only completed the first week before I got wrapped up in other work. I haven’t touched the render since then. This is a caricature of Ian McKellen and Patrick Stewart. I feel that McKellen captures the likeness and caricature better than Stewart, but am unsure of what I can do to make it better. I would like a critique on pretty much any aspect you think could be improved, but I feel my weaknesses are in the areas after the modeling and sculpting is done (texturing, lighting, shading) When working on these I have the idea of stylizing the shapes but somewhat realistic in the details. In the vein of Guzz Soares work https://www.artstation.com/guzz
Anyway hopefully this was in time and it makes into the next stream.
Oh and I just got done watching the last stream. @theluthier and @jlampel you were saying how the Principled shader doesn’t have a scale value. A way to get a scale value is to use multiply the Subsurface Radius values. What you can do is hook up an external Combine XYZ node to the subsurface radius and put a math node with multiply in between to act as the scale. Not that great of a solution but I believe it works.
@codywinch Nice! I’m looking forward to talking about these later today.
To clear up the SSS thing, the Principled shader’s subsurface value is the scale, and a scale of 0 is just diffuse.
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