BC4-1810 – October 2018 Class Home Work – Sparkes983

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    Kent Trammell
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      @sparkes983 Congrats on completing homework for all 4 weeks! I know that’s a big effort; one worth commending.

      I’ll echo Zsolt the lighting in your arch viz is on the dim side. Perhaps it’s intended to be post suns set or pre-sunrise. Either way my overwhelming reaction is “I wish it were brighter”. Additionally I don’t get much indication about sunlight itself. It’s brightest in the doorway on the left side of the image whereas I would like to see the sun streaming in through a window and playing on the floor and/or cabinets in an interesting way.

      Overall it’s a B from me.

      I like the updated light match to brighten the image. It looks pretty close to the source in terms of lighting. Though the source has a metallic material with textures and yours is grey, which causes a disconnect in terms of *matching*. Still it’s a good effort. Another B in my book.

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