September Live Critiques – Submit Your Blender Art!

[Mortimer]

All those are things that I would like to have feedback on. I would also like feedback on the coloring if possible. I’m trying to achieve a style similar to the Netflix 3D show Knights of Sidonia or the show RWBY by Rooster Teeth. However, the character I submitted is supposed to be a type of slime so I’m not sure if that is very helpful. 

[galledark]

Hi everyone.
This image is my very first render, i’m still a beginner cause i’ve started my learning of blender on…August i think ^^.
Actually i’ve finished the section one on the introduction to blender and i gonna start the second one, (with animation, rigging, and particles…)
I take the opportunity to say a HUGE thanks for the CG cookie community, the courses are amazing and i’m sure at 100% that I would not have reached this level with just youtube tutorials.

[Kent Trammell]

@galledark Congrats on your first render! That’s a milestone in your 3D/blender journey. While we certainly appreciate the submission, submitting to live critiques are a perk of the Citizen PRO membership:

You’re more than welcome to watch the stream though!

Thanks @richm for clarifying 🙂

[Kent Trammell]

UPDATE on tomorrow’s stream: We’ll be critiquing submissions from @richm, @michalzisman, @mousefactory, and @silentheart00. The focus is mostly character-based.

Twill be a good time! See you there.

[silentheart00]

Sorry, I didn’t see this.  I don’t think the multiple tag thing is working since I got no notification of this at all on the site.

[Jerry Chu]

where do I see the re-run for the stream =0 I had work

[Kent Trammell]

Thanks to everyone who submitted critiques and/or watched the live streams this month! We’ll do critique month again soon 🙂

[Chetan Ranjan]

Hi!
I just watched the event.Thanks a ton Kent and Jonathan for critiques. I am so sorry for not being their during the session.

I made the smiling demon and the girl with her hair covering the face in blender only. The rest are a mixture of zbrush and blender. I used zbrush for hair, few tweaks in the anatomy and rendering. 

Sculpt 1. I made this stylized female face in zbrush and blender just to see how far I can go without using any references. I do struggle a lot with the eyes. I started this in Blender and this took it to zbrush for hair sculpting.

Sculpt 2. This quadruped is based on a concept art by Mike Corriero https://www.artstation.com/artwork/b1Rn. I sculpted the hair and the muscles in zbrush. This one is only zbrush. I will tone down the anatomy a bit

Sculpt 3. This one is blender only and my 2nd blender sculpt. This one is based on https://www.artstation.com/artwork/qnmAL 
I did the hair after watching your tutorial on curve hair modeling on youtube and then I sculpted on it. 

Sculpt 4. This was my 1st sculpt in blender and it is based on a concept art by Blaz porenta Knock knock

https://cdna.artstation.com/p/assets/images/images/006/837/628/large/blaz-porenta-knockknock.jpg?1501619611

Its only dyntopo

Thank you again for your critiques. It means a lot to me and I will work on all of the critiques you gave me. I am sorry for not being their during the event. September and october has been a mentally rough phase in my life.

[georgeo1989]

Hey There @jlampel 

This is the update to the pier. Overall structure of the piece didn’t really change. However, I got some of your advice in there. Let me know what you think, thanks for the awesome critiques. 

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