[CGC Challenge #2] Vehicles

[spikeyxxx]

Live Critique Submission

Still a WIP. The legs need to be rigged, so that I can pose them The wings need to be more rounded to better fit with the rest.

What I mostly (but not only) would like to know is if the composition is okay.

I know there are still a lot of modelling problems, but I won’t be able to fix everything, so I would like it if you could tell me what you think that needs to be changed, because I’ve been looking at it too long, so I can’t really judge what is most important;)

The overall design can’t be changed anymore, but feel free to comment on that as well. (Small changes might even still be possible…)

I was thinking of the moth shuttle from the late 90’s sci-fi series ‘LEXX’ (couldn’t find any halfway decent pictures of it to show here, sorry), but then a bee and not organic, but mechanical.

Here is my WIP thread if needed: https://cgcookie.com/t/2028-cgc-challenge-juli-2019-vehicle-wip

Thanks in advance Jonathan & Jonathan!

[Aaron Rudderham]

Live Critique Submission

Hope this isn’t too late, but despite my scene still needing a lot of work I thought I’d give it a shot.

Got the main scene and composition done. Been working on the textures as you can see but a lot of it still isn’t finished, along with stuff like particle effects and motion blur. Going for a slightly stylized look and hoping I’m going in the right direction. Mostly looking for critiques on my materials/shaders/textures and the general composition but anything you feel you think will improve what’s going on would be very much appreciated. Been doing Blender for about a year and a half now and I feel this could be gearing up to be my best scene yet, at least I hope so, but I’ll let you all be the judge of that. Thanks in advance!

I’m also currently rendering a couple more scenes related to this and I’ll update this post with a link to my polybook if you’d like some more things to go on.

UPDATE: Renders are finished, here’s the link.

[Cookie Dough]

Live Critique Submission

Hoping I’m not late, but here it is.

My original idea was to have it be a series of tests the dummy was going to do on the hot rod wheel chair. At some point in the process I ended up making it at a park. The main thing I’m not sure what to do is how to make it look like a dummy, or if I want it to be a dummy.

I don’t know if I’ll make it to the live stream. I haven’t had a lot of time recently. I’m surprised I got as far as I did on this. Please forgive the noise, I didn’t have time to get it denoised.

[Thibault Caradec]

@cgcookiedough If you want it to look like a dummy, you should texture it like a dummy I guess. 

[Matthew Fricker]

@cgcookiedough A quick scour of google images suggests that it needs to be yellow , have a spring for a neck , that black and yellow circular logo and eyes and eyebrows but absolutely no facial expression that would show the sheer horror it is experiencing when you strap it onto that chair of yours….. 

[Cookie Dough]

@frikkr Thanks. That helps a lot.

[concrescence]

This is taking me some courage to upload :\ (It’s kind of private)

[concrescence]

@otowa whoah looks allot better then I thought when I was watching the stream on my DS. Sorry for any bad vibes.

[Thibault Caradec]

@concrescence Hmm? Bad vibes?

[spikeyxxx]

Question:

When the rules say ‘one entry only’, does that mean only one final render? Or are different renders (of the same vehicle of course) allowed?

[smurfmier1985]

@spikeyxxx all the renders and angles and WIP you want, just one model per person. One post counts as one entry, whether it has 2 pictures or 20 of your model 🙂

[spikeyxxx]

@smurfmier1985 O.k., thank you!

[concrescence]

@otowa I was watching the live stream on my gameboy and I was laughing at how  bad the hover car looked but on my computer it looks great!

[Millard Hall]

[Martin Říha]

@pressman505 This is nice :o)

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