BC1-1808 Homework, Zsolt Cseh

[silentheart00]

@csehz Now you’re thinking with proportions!  Good work!  The sketchfab model looks a little lumpy in places.  Try turning down the strength on the smooth brush to help buffer those lumps out.  Maybe the tummy is a little large; it looks like it’s the monkey is 2 heads tall total, so the tummy would be roughly 2/3 of a head and the feet are the last 1/3.  If you could flatten out the bottom of the feet more, I think that would help to take some height off.

After checking rough proportions again, it looks like it’s about right.  Maybe the 3D view is skewing things a little.  I still think flattening the bottom of the feet will help.  Maybe the belly is too wide?  It looks like the widest point in your reference meets with the cheeks.  Ears look good, the face looks pretty good, too.  Maybe the lower section of the top lip could be pulled out more?  Similar thought with the bottom lip.  Hands look good.  I like the creases separating the different sections; it looks really nice.  Great improvement!

[Aaron Rudderham]

@csehz Another (very minor) thing to point out is there’s a bit of clipping and all around funky verts between its legs. Nothing major mind you, but just thought I’d point it out.

[Kent Trammell]

@csehz The biggest thing I’m stuck on is the face. The toy’s face is super cute whereas the sculpt is lacking such cuteness. For one, the mouth looks more etched on the face rather than truly indented / formed into the face. The eyes feel…well..like nipples. I’d make them simply round ovals (no dimple in the middle).

[Zsolt Cseh]

Homework Submission Week 4

Ajjaj it is “Deadline Sunday”, when my vertex counts went up uncontrolled, the computer counting for half minutes at each saving, which okay gives at least time to see others homework, but what to do now when so lot of things should be corrected or at least addressed yet?

In the meantime knowing that tomorrow is work, have to do some (real) cloth ironing, it can be the side effect of Blender thinking that it will be enough to iron the left side of the shirt as anyway the other one will be symmetrized for free 😀

But so okay the result, before of anything @silentheart00  Silent would like to thank you that you checked the WIP version so thoroughly and adviced in so details, Kent also for you mentioning that an ellipse would be much better for the eyes.

Tried to touch everything which was mentioned in your advices and possibly not crash everything, the banana in the left hand is rather symbolic as did not want to change the neutralized position of the model with modifying the fingers there to keep it.

23:55 here and also the Sketchfab went up to link https://skfb.ly/6B7t8 with a 70% decimated version, anyway I think this guy is simple more fat than the reference and from that satisfied state naming him “Buddha Monkey” from now 🙂

[silentheart00]

@csehz I’m glad I could help!  Nice model.  I like the eyes better on this version.

[Pavel Mazanik]

@csehz well defined shape as I can judge. Good solid sculpt. Good job 🙂

[Matthew Ullrey]

@csehz The changes you made are a nice improvement. I like the addition of the banana. 

I am also left handed, but use the mouse right handedly. I find that I sometimes have both the stylus and mouse fighting for control of the cursor. I set up my express keys on the right side of the pen tablet as well. It isn’t a bad workflow and often it can be an advantage while doing research. As you take notes with one hand, you are able to  navigate the computer with the other.

[Aaron Rudderham]

@csehz Much improved, I like it! I hope after class you go and decide to texture it, really bring it to life!

[Mahir Tasin]

@csehz Nice sculpting. And yeah it will look cool with texture 

[smurfmier1985]

@csehz Such a cute monkey, well done zsolt!!

[Kent Trammell]

@csehz Solid update, Zsolt! Kudos for receiving and applying the crits. He’s got much more of the cute factor that the previous version was lacking. A+ this week, good sir 👏

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