BC1-1808 Homework, Zsolt Cseh

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August 10, 2018 at 4:28 pm #9933
Zsolt Cseh
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Homework Submission Week 1

Hereby opening my personal BC1-1808 room, welcome everyone who click into it 🙂

Actually I built this scene with still 2.79 because often having time constraint, so left 2.8 for the developers yet, but already being interested very much in general.

My intend was to composite something, which builds somehow itself, adding things here or there till a kind of balance formed on the picture, hopefully you feel the fresh air there, even the locomotive breathing pink steam 🙂

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August 10, 2018 at 4:34 pm #40256
smurfmier1985
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So colorful! Looking at your scene gives me a big smile on my face 😁
August 10, 2018 at 7:36 pm #40257
silentheart00
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Very nice! I like the colors are very fun and happy, and I like the composition. I find it a little weird that there are cone trees. Something feels off about that side and I don’t know exactly why. I wonder if you swapped the back house and windmill positions what kind of balance/ symmetry that would do. I like it overall.
August 10, 2018 at 8:07 pm #40258
Aaron Rudderham
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Real cute, and glad to see you on this class! I do have to agree with @silentheart00 though in the fact that it feels a little lopsided, at least in the foreground. Maybe swap around the windmill and the house? Could work. Great choice of colours though, they really stand out, it looks real nice!
August 10, 2018 at 8:25 pm #40259
William Miller
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The trees on the far right feel like they’re glued to the side of the hill.
August 11, 2018 at 7:36 am #40260
Kaj Suominen
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Cool picture, liking it. composition wise it seems to be a bit everywhere. bit hard to tell which is the focal point if its the locomotive, the trees on right could be more tilted. the left close windmill maybe have another ground ball on left of it so you could then tilt the windmill towards to the right.and maybe change the middle house on the right side of the road so its point aswell to the locomotive.
August 11, 2018 at 8:27 am #40261
Zsolt Cseh
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Thanks guys a lot for your perceptions, yes agreeing with all of them, surely there could be improved with spending some time on it yet.

Basically the left windmill is placed there as that yellow area is some wheat field or something by the concept. So just thought that is there while one house in the middle.

In general being glad that the composition itself started a kind of brainstorming about its balance if it has at all, maybe inspite of being of a picture, the objects on it are moving 😀
August 11, 2018 at 5:35 pm #40262
Scott McClellan
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Soooo fun and colorful. Wonderful job
August 13, 2018 at 11:13 am #40263
Kent Trammell
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@csehz This looks straight out of one of my kids tv shows. Love the colors – love the vibe. Great job! A+ from me.

I can see where people are coming from with the ‘lopsided feel”. Part of it is the chosen style. The trees on the furthest right hill..it feels like the bottom of the hill is a sphere and sloping under itself; causing the furthest front trees to be parallel.

Also the terrain is very round and rolling, but the right edge of the river is straight. Feels out of place a bit.

Overall, it’s a fantastic submission and these notes are minor. But part of being better at computer graphics/art is that the critiques get more plentiful and more nit picky. We just see something great and want to see it be great+ 🙂
August 13, 2018 at 4:17 pm #40264
Curious
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Your model makes me happy inside! lol makes me imagine if I was tiny I could go play in your town and it would always be sunny with lots o’ play dough to play with 😀 Nice work can’t wait to see your next one.
August 18, 2018 at 11:20 am #40265
Zsolt Cseh
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@theluthier I absolutely understand and being grateful for the constructive critiques, finding it as a very important feedback.

Also thanks for everyone for the nice words, this week had to stay back a little bit on the forum as needed to focus on the homework on week 2 😀
August 18, 2018 at 11:24 am #40266
Zsolt Cseh
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Homework Submission Week 2

In January there was the tyre challenge in some phase, which inspired me to do something similiar but with flowers, as long time planned to experiment with flower petals.

Please find in which variations it came out from a resized cube as base, even did not combine with its shape too much, rather left the rest to the array and lattice modifiers, plus subsurf applied on all of them.

The diversity shows so much possibilities, that once in Python would like to do some flower generator kind of something, it is a dream but who knows maybe will be able to present the results in the planned Python class once
August 18, 2018 at 11:38 am #40267
Andres Altuve
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@csehz This a super interesting project, did you use any modifiers besides subdivision surfaces?
August 18, 2018 at 11:43 am #40268
smurfmier1985
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@csehz I like that you made so many different ones, smart to use array and lattice, nice work 😊
August 18, 2018 at 12:41 pm #40269
Curious
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@csehz This would make a great poster on my wall, cause I just want to stare at it:D Nice!!
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