Polybook, procyonlotor

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November 10, 2018 at 8:37 pm #10133
John Sanderson
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I’ve been inspired to start one of these. I am attempting to do one sculpt everyday for 90 days. I haven’t participated in sculpt January before so I grabbed the calendars from the last 2 years and will be doing those this month and next and then participating come January. I am hoping this will be a good place to post for feedback. I won’t post all of them probably, but the ones I really want feedback on I will. Here is the male portrait sculpt. Feedback definitely appreciated. Anatomy isn’t my strong suit, and I am really trying to push my learning there especially:
November 10, 2018 at 9:16 pm #44170
odunov
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It’s great to be consistent and good luck with your 90 day challenge! May you not burn out while doing it 🙂

As for your sculpt: His eyes and brow ridge seem too big, the top of his skull is low and, he kind of looks like he’s smiling ( I don’t know if you intended it that way) which might be counterproductive if you’re trying to study anatomy, although, I guess, facial expressions are part of it too 🙂
Keep in mind that I only know the bare basics of sculpting and anatomy.
November 10, 2018 at 10:14 pm #44171
John Sanderson
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@drgnclw Thanks man! Really helps to have that second pair of eyes. You were right on all counts. I went in and made those changes and he definitely looks better. The smile was intentional 🙂
November 11, 2018 at 9:20 am #44172
odunov
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@procyonlotor Glad I could be of some help! It definitely looks better but feels like you can make the eyes even smaller. It might be because field of view is different between the turntable and the new screenshot.
November 11, 2018 at 11:21 am #44173
John Sanderson
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@drgnclw Thanks again! I shrunk the eyes and made a few other slight adjustments. Please feel free to continue to critique, but I am abandoning this guy as it was a one-day sculpt. I will remember your critiques for next time though. Here is the “finished” result:

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November 12, 2018 at 4:27 pm #44174
silentheart00
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@procyonlotor Hey, good for you for jumping in! It’s a good start. The ear is a bit tall; typically it starts at the top of the eye and goes to the bottom of the nose, so it’s a bit tall, unless intentional. The eyes are a bit big, too. I typically divide the face into 5 vertical sections for the eyes; the spacing usually works out about 5 eye lengths when looking from the front, hence 5 sections. Other than that, pretty good.
November 12, 2018 at 7:12 pm #44175
John Sanderson
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@silentheart00 Thanks @silentheart00 ! It’s good to have metrics. I just eyeballed it on this one, next time I will be sure to check actual measurements. I’m wrapping up day 12 of the sculpting challenge with this. I feel like I am improving some and able to see it after just 12 days (of course, there was lots of improvement to be had). The theme was hydra. Obviously there is still some detailing to do (horns, tongue, and bodies), but this is where I leave it for now:
November 13, 2018 at 2:12 pm #44176
silentheart00
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@procyonlotor Nice work. You’re getting some good work in sculpting for sure.
November 13, 2018 at 3:03 pm #44177
John Sanderson
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Day 13, Tornado:
November 14, 2018 at 2:52 pm #44178
John Sanderson
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Day 14 “Cartoon Space Animal”:

Was this close to doing Bucky O’hare, but went with Stitch in the end.
November 15, 2018 at 11:01 pm #44179
John Sanderson
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Day 15 “rhinoceros”:
November 16, 2018 at 2:58 pm #44180
John Sanderson
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Day 16 “torso”: More anatomy practice. Feedback please. This is where I am most trying to improve.

https://sketchfab.com/models/71ea2db048f84ffab50fa0cb454baa2f
November 16, 2018 at 3:57 pm #44181
silentheart00
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@procyonlotor Everything looks pretty good to me, except the top of the pec and the collar bone area don’t look quite right. It looks like you cut in the definition for the collar bone instead of thinking how they work with the pec muscles. It’s more of a smooth transition than a blobby one, if that makes sense.
November 16, 2018 at 4:01 pm #44182
John Sanderson
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@silentheart00 Thanks Silent!
November 16, 2018 at 7:27 pm #44183
odunov
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@procyonlotor Rhino looks great but I have one nitpick about it. The square-ish shapes formed by those very thin cracks or folds (I don’t know what they’re called specifically) kinda tend to follow the big lines on the body. Yours kinda looks like it’s a stone statue with some craks on it.

Also two things about the torso. It looks the character is leaning forward a bit and the lower side of the torso looks a bit thin from the side. However, just like my previous feedback, take it with a grain of salt 🙂

Overall, every model seems good..
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