Update to critiqued Blender Scene

[georgeo1989]

Had this scene critiqued by the awesome @jlampel and Tim, (not sure his username is). They game some really helpful tips and I think that helped me make this scene just a hair better. Over concept never changed, a lot of details did however. Below is the original:

And here is the update:

Hope it’s a little better. 

P.S. Sorry about the multiposting. Had a couple chrome crashes. Thanks all!

[Jonathan Lampel]

Yes, that is better! I’m so glad you followed up on it, and I hope you learned some things along the way. In fact, it looks like you implemented every single piece of advice Tim and I gave, which is in and of itself fantastic. There are still things that could be improved, but I think you’d be best suited leaving this one as is and focusing on your new scene for now. 

[Matthew Fricker]

That is a huge improvement 🙂 well done! 

[Jasmine Wongus]

Oooh, I love that red washing over the image… It’s so vibrant!! That’s a great update! …Man, I would NOT want to be on those choppy waters. That would scare me, I’m tellin’ ya!

[georgeo1989]

Thanks everyone, I loved working on this and will continue to grow and improve!

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