Sketchbook – silentheart00

[smurfmier1985]

@silentheart00 Nice side view! Also love the jewelry, and the hair of course. This is my favorite of the characters you did so far!

[silentheart00]

@yukinoh1989 Thanks!  What do you like about the designs?

[silentheart00]

@smurfmier1985 Thanks!  Why is this your favorite so far?

[smurfmier1985]

@silentheart00 His hair makes him unique, it’s something that stands out in a good way, something you remember. The color of his eyes really pop. His freckles and the way he’s looking at you suggest he is a nice guy, but his scars suggest there is more to his story. Mysterious. The jewelry compliment his overall look. Everything is just coming together real nice, complimenting each other, making for an interesting character 😊 

[silentheart00]

@smurfmier1985 Thanks.  Good to see my instincts are going in the right direction, I guess lol.  It also helps to have someone besides myself to look at the character and tell me their thoughts; helps me to know if what I want to communicate is there or not in the design.

[silentheart00]

Done!  Woohoo!

Hazard in all his busty glory lol.  Now, to go back to Kilyn and design her friggin’ outfit!

[yukino hatake]

@silentheart00 it’s really interesting since each design is unique. They all are characters where you thought about. Like adding freckles, juwelery, the hair what always is really amazing done, also the eyes always are so well done. Like Miranda also mentioned you notice sometimes like with the scar he had been trough something, like we think we know him but then again not since it’s also some mystery to guess or find out what happened. How he got that.its really fun to see you make designs and I look forward to the clothing. 

[silentheart00]

@yukinoh1989 Thanks for your feedback =]  It really helps.

[odunov]

@silentheart00 Good work. One thing that seems weird to me is his jaw in profile. Kinda seems smooth compared to the front view.

By the way, do you still (or are you going to) draw full characters like in the first page?

[Pavel Mazanik]

@silentheart00 nice work, but there are some visible anatomy mistakes. 

1. Sternocleidomastoid muscle should go from sternum and clavicle to place right behind the ear, not behind the neck.

2. Chin profile should not be the same as jaw profile because of suprahyoid muscles.

3. The clavicle is too straight in my opinion, it should be more like a cupid’s bow.

That’s just my observation though, not like I’m an anatomy expert or something.

[silentheart00]

@drgnclw It was hard to find a side view for the reference, so I did my best guess.  And yes, that’s going to be my next project: expand out into more full body stuff.

[silentheart00]

@nekronavt Hmm, this would’ve been helpful earlier in my process to correct those mistakes, but I’ll keep that in mind in the future.

[Aaron Rudderham]

@silentheart00 Well dang, don’t think I’ve ever popped into here. Naturally being very inexperienced when it comes to 2D I can’t really offer any appropriate critique but I’ll definitely be keeping a close eye on this thread, looking forward to what else you put out there!

[silentheart00]

@thecabbagedetective Heh, thanks.  Maybe my WIPs can help you.  I’m more than happy to critique your stuff, too, so if you decide to make a sketchbook I’ll take a look =]

[Pavel Mazanik]

@silentheart00 Sorry, I’ll try to be more timely next time 😀

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