Polybook Morten Fjellheim (Arev)

[Tomas Plasil]

Hey Morten, it looks great, here is some feedback:

The scratches are too uniformly placed all over, and their angle also seems very repetitive. Id say tone the amount ofscratches down a lot and also think about which places of the lamp would make sense to be scratched.Especially the scratches on the glass are a bit overdone im my opinion.

Another thing is the metal under the scratches is bright silver…Its like someone took this old damaged lamp and scratched it with a knife and then took a photo of it. If the scratches were old, they would be the places from which the rust would start spreading, and dirt would collect in them.

Lastly I think it would look great if there was a height difference between the  paint and the rust. It looks like it might be there a bit now, but it doesnt seem like two separate layers.

[Morten Fjellheim]

Thats pretty much the thoughts i have myself. When it comes to the bump, i just cannot make it stroneger. On the other hand, the metal isnt very thick so if i put too much it would mean it was rusted through the metall. I will try to make it more visible.

[Tomas Plasil]

Actually I just looked at some photos of rusted paint and there is not as much height difference as I thought. Well it depends on individual photos, some have it and some dont. But this rust is fine as it is 🙂

[Morten Fjellheim]

Here is my latest render. Hope you like it.

[Morten Fjellheim]

Ar first i decided not to put flames on. Then a friend told me it should definatly have flames, so i did it!

[Morten Fjellheim]

When i was part of the car modeling class i never finished. I realised car modeling was a bit dificult at the time. But whattaya know, after some heavy tutorial watching and focus i am now on my way to finishing it. Not the actual car i did in the class, but a new one.

[Morten Fjellheim]

Half done car with some very improvised wheels just for the render.

[Morten Fjellheim]

An update on my golf. As the images show i am getting nearer to finish. I stil have some more work but it is kind of giving away a hint of how the finish result will be!

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