Okay. I’m having issues with the other hand….I tried taking some reference photos but it just doesn’t seem right. I want to make sure that the police baton was visible but it still feels like the weapon is “hidden”
I’m coming from the field of blender than concept. Here’s my first approach.
I’ve got a lot of sketches of the character. I’m doing a Japanese woman. But trying one that fits both formal attire as shown and oriental culture is a bit challenging.
This is a really cool take on in. It’s great that it’s a security camera that’s showing us these criminals. Really makes it meta, but in the best kind of way.
Maybe don’t have the weapon straight down by her side. You could possibly even point it at the viewer. Are you doing more than one piece? I would honestly work on one and make it amazing.