BC4-1810 Homework,malhomsi

[Kent Trammell]

it was tedious.. mesure every thing modeling..shading ..a lot of work for a mediocre result

@malhomsi Wow, yeah, that’s a ton of work to build everything from scratch! I wasn’t expecting people to do that this week but rather use one of my provided scenes or use an existing one of their own. Heh I do love your art on the wall!

It’s impressive you were able to do so much in a week’s time and considering it’s outside your comfort zone. You’ve earned an A on effort alone. I like the theme a lot and the models themselves looks great. Lighting is believable too. Interestingly there’s still a lot of light getting through those closed blinds 🤔

Here’s a couple notes:

• What’s your camera focal length? My feeling is that it’s too telephoto (too high in mm value) to be possible in a room this size. It’s flirting with an orthographic vibe. I suggest knocking it down between 35-50mm to feel more believable.
• I’d like to see more reflection on the tile and the wooden desk. Right now they both seem 100% diffuse. Reflection interest would be great for those materials. I don’t mean high gloss but even a little.

[Pavel Mazanik]

@malhomsi You have much more comfortable blender corner than me xD. Good work.

[Zsolt Cseh]

@malhomsi And there is ‘One-legged Pete’ on the wall from the sculpting class 🙂 

Very good idea also that shining through effect through the windows

[malhomsi]

once again a very good class .

thank u @theluthier 

i was secretly asking myself how my last project posted on CGC gallery  wasn t staff picked , i found t not bad at all  , modeling is ok ,textures  and shading feel pretty good .  i was disappointed .

today streaming brought me the bitter answer..  it’s the magazine effect .! my art is good ,but boring not interesting ..

i see it now  ; and i’m going to take a step back and rethink  it..

good luck for all of you , hopefully i ll see u around in the next class !

[Kent Trammell]

@malhomsi Admittedly I didn’t push the “magazine factor” in week 4’s livestream. I didn’t realize how often I would be giving the note. It taught me something too!

You do really good work sir. You’re commonly among my faves 🙂

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