@cgcookiedough Good work! The lock mechanism looks good. After that, I think all the camera movement is a bit disorienting (maybe what you were going for?). I had to watch it a few times before I knew exactly what I was looking at. Particularly that first 180 degree turn. We see the wrapping start to pan away, and then suddenly it’s screening our entire view. You’re putting the viewer’s focus on the new thing, and then shoving the old thing in their face. It happens towards the end again as the headphones come out. It feels like they should be the focal point, but they are quickly obscured again. I would slow the camera down and be sure each piece gets adequate screen time upon reveal. Also, I think the white box is supposed to be styrofoam, but it’s a bit too glossy. It would need more roughness if styrofoam is what you’re going for. It’s definitely a cool idea that could be real slick with a few refinements.
