Reply To: May Live Critiques – Submit Your Blender Art!

[Bauke Post]

Hey there!

Here is my submission for the critique session.

I would like some feedback on:

1. The topology on the left pad, it doesn’t look that great 

2. The transition from the grips to the body

3. The lighting

4. The overall topology

5. How to create a bunch of small holes just behind the touchpad. When I tried it, the geometry got way too busy and messy.

Sketchfab url: https://sketchfab.com/models/f5ad7734e08f4f91a3b081d5a406ea32

Edit: This work is mostly focused on modeling and good topology. Also, I already noticed I have too many edge loops around the pads, so that’s already one thing I could improve :).

Edit 2: The model is now also available for download on Sketchfab. It was rendered in Eevee btw 🙂 (you can see the overlays from the viewport)