Reply To: Finished my first Character, critique needed
Yeah, the eye spacing looks better. The lower lip shape maybe could be a little more rounded; it looks like it’s coming to a pinch than a round lip shape, which I like in the left image.
The nose is better; that weird ridge is less prominent.
The nose still looks a bit generic and the nostrils aren’t clearly defined. It’s okay, I’m terrible at noses, too. Try adding a harder crease in the nostrils.
Good progress. Maybe you should add skull studies and muscle structure studies to your routine. They don’t have to be every day; maybe once a week or every couple of weeks. Practice what you can when you can. You got this.