I think in that first example you linked @dostovel that the modelling is sweet, but as the others have mentioned the presentation could really bring it to life. The biggest thing that stands out to me is the lighting – it seems very sharp shadows from probably one light source? but the reference isn’t lit like that at all. I see a shaft of light highlighting the centre hut, and there’s a nice warm glow from the lanterns and the hut itself – I fee it conveys comfort and cozyness.
It got me thinking to Kents forest course, do you remember the lessons where the lighting and atmosphere are added – and you go from quite an unappealing scene to something quite incredible.
Birds in the sky, leaves fluttering through on a windy day, some atmosphere – maybe things like this can help with our piece.
