Live Critique Submission
Hope this isn’t too late, but despite my scene still needing a lot of work I thought I’d give it a shot.

Got the main scene and composition done. Been working on the textures as you can see but a lot of it still isn’t finished, along with stuff like particle effects and motion blur. Going for a slightly stylized look and hoping I’m going in the right direction. Mostly looking for critiques on my materials/shaders/textures and the general composition but anything you feel you think will improve what’s going on would be very much appreciated. Been doing Blender for about a year and a half now and I feel this could be gearing up to be my best scene yet, at least I hope so, but I’ll let you all be the judge of that. Thanks in advance!
I’m also currently rendering a couple more scenes related to this and I’ll update this post with a link to my polybook if you’d like some more things to go on.
UPDATE: Renders are finished, here’s the link.