Reply To: Addyson_H. -Sketchbook
@addysonh Whoops, this kind of slipped through the cracks for me. I think the chin looked weird to you because the lower lip was really big compared to the rest of the face, and you corrected it a little bit in the latest image. The top lip is a little flat; kick out the lip curve a bit for the fleshier lips. Take a picture of yourself from the side if you can and look at your own lips. The brow seems a little high, which is getting thrown off by the crooked eye. Try this: look straight ahead, put your finger on the bridge of your nose (the lowest part) and draw a straight line over your eye (don’t poke yourself). Where does your finger go? Or, back to that side view of yourself, where does the bridge of your nose line up with your eye? A similar idea with the eyebrow, as well. It looks like an eyebrow you would see from the front, so how does it differ in the side view?
For the hair, where’s your hair part? It looks like the hair has no starting point. The part can really influence how you draw the hair. Again, get some references and do some small studies.
The legs outlined in red are what I think you meant by the leg positions, which will influence how the wrinkles fall. Let me know if I’m on the right track.
Also, what is the main light source in this image? That could really affect how you handle the lighting, as well.
There’s improvement, and I think you’re starting to develop your eye. Good effort.
