Reply To: [CLOSED] FREE Blender Art Critiques – Tuesday May 28th

I’d like to submit a commission I’m working on for a friend of mine. It’s based on a personal experience of her. The request was some grassland with a  ditch (i think it’s called?) with a harp floating a bit above the water, and the moon in the background. I added a tree to make the image a bit more interesting. 

The modeling is as good as done. I’ve textured the tree and the grass, and I’m just about to texture the harp in in Substance Painter.  I want to do some more decorative relief (I hope I spelled this right)  in the top of the harp.

All commands are welcome, but I’d especially like to know if I could improve the texturing of the harp and the lightning of the scene. 

Here’s a picture of the current state at this moment. I know the lightning under the tree in the bottom left is not good. I’m still working on that 🙂

And here’s a test render of the harp by it self in it’s current state (textured in blender):

I can’t wait to see your response 🙂

I will probably be watching the stream live. See you then 🙂