@procyonlotor Your light match was among my faves this week. It’s very close to the source in terms of S&L. My only note is the lack of a ground plane + smooth transition to background. I talked about it more during the stream. Recording will be available soon.
Overall it’s a B+ from me.
You really nailed the sharp rim light in your character lighting – especially the head. While I like the dramatic direction, I do think the darks are too dark. Or rather where it gets really dark it disappears into the background. This issue is most noticeable on the character’s right arm (screen left). I’d recommend brightening the background to remedy this or add a touch of fill light to the character via low-powered HDRI environment.
Another B+ from me 👍