@projekt154 Yeah, no problem. I tend to push towards realism, and if you think these smaller critiques are going against what you are trying to achieve, then feel free to ignore them. These were more suggestions of personal preference than glaring problems of something fundamental. It’s up to you to choose what you think is best in the detail of style.
Do you have any references of the style you’re going after? Since my mindset doesn’t default to cartoony styles, I think that would help me to know what to look for when critiquing your style.