Reply To: Addyson_H. -Sketchbook

@addysonh Getting better!  The face looks better, too.  The back looks strange to me; the arc isn’t quite right in respect to anatomy.  There’s the ribcage, which is rigid in this sense, a soft middle part that has your intestines, and then the rigid hip.  The spine is also flexible and has an S-curve shape to it, so that should be reflected in the posture, as well.  Again, one leg is shorter than the other for how the legs are angled.  If the legs are together, the knee of the bent under leg needs to come out a little more.  The pointed foot looks a little small, too, in relation to the rest of the body.  Nice to see improvements to the braid, but maybe the taper is overexaggerated.  Try making it a little more gradual, and there’s still some thickness of hair at the end, so it doesn’t disappear into nothing.  God job on experimenting and finding limits, now refine it.

At the side I included an example of hue shifting and an example of value shifting.  Which one is more interesting to you?

Overall, good improvement!  Keep going!