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sambear
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    Thank you Wayne and Miranda for the rig suggestions. I’ve been working on making some changes to the Eleven rig over the past weeks and I’m planning on using it in this month’s ESC contest. This month’s audio is super tough to figure out a scenario that makes sense. I scribbled up a little animatic of sorts to experiment with the acting choices. Could you guys give my some advice on how to make this scenario make a little more sense?

    here is my first animatic:

    and here is another one with an alternate ending:

    If you couldn’t understand my scribbles, the main synopsis is that a crook (Voice 2)’s underling (Voice 1) is actually working for the police. The crook wonders why his underling is serving him food, but soon finds that it is a trap. The problem is that the guy says he’s going to “arrest [him] later, again”, which doesn’t make much sense. Here is the transcript of what they are saying: 

    Voice 1: Why would I do that?
    Voice 2: It’s what I was wondering, why would you do that?
    Voice 1: Like a party, or dinner or something?
    Voice 2: I don’t know, I thought you were… planned the evening.
    Voice 1: No I meant to like arrest you, I’ll arrest you later again.
    Voice 2: Take it easy Jim.

    Any  comments or critiques are welcome!

    Thanks,

    Sambear