@yukinoh1989 Not a bad start. Definitely get that eyeball in there as soon as possible as it’ll show you how the eyelids should be shaped around it. A few things I do see:
- The inner corner of the eye needs to be pulled back more in the side view (you’ll see this once you put the eye in.) This will also help build the bridge of the nose up a little bit, too.
- There’s something strange going on with the forehead, maybe too flat on the sides. It would help a lot to have shots from the top and bottom of the head, too, not just side shots.
- Lip corners could be pulled back a bit in the side view. Your lips are not on a flat plane; they wrap around your teeth, which are in a curved path.
- Maybe the cheekbones could be a little more defined.
The nose is pretty good. Even though you are going for something more stylized, I suggest taking a look at some anatomy to help understand the structure and to ground it in something familiar, especially for human faces. Good effort.
