He still exits toward the camera. I didn’t change that as I pretty much intend to cut on the final pose. My instructor wanted me to cut even sooner (which I will probably do for his submission, but I think the shot works better if he at least starts to walk off).
Added frame counter (I finally remembered!)
Added left glance.
Dragged right foot.
I haven’t done anything with the chessboard. I may yet, but as it isn’t a critical part of the exercise it would be a finishing touch.
And I know his head collides with the table on the lean. Working out the best way to fix that without having to fix too much else.
