Dominik the design of your character is pretty interesting. The clothes seem well made. Did you use a special program or did you sculpt those? Unfortunately I don’t have a great eye for things like proportions and such. She seems good to me in that respect. The part that sticks out to me the most is her face. It seems a bit static. For example in the eye winking pose. I half expect there to see the upper cheek to raise slightly and the eye brow to compress down a little bit . Without that kind of facial definition it makes it feel a bit flat. But this is for games so that may be the style you are going for. Cool stuff Dom. Keep at it!
@williamatics respectfully, Dominik asked for a critique on the character above not on his grammar. I’m sure there are screen writer forums that would appreciate your attention to grammatical detail. Here it’s about the art and it’s a disservice to leave such a comment and have no input on the topic at hand. Please keep that in mind.
