@matthew1917 I agree with Miranda on the toy truck feels just a bit off, and that could be the fresnel. Otherwise, it’s a solid start.
The day scene is nicely lit. Maybe a touch of orange in the lighting would work great, but that’s a nitpicky thing.
The night scene is nice, but there doesn’t seem to be a light coming through the window, if you wanted a soft moonlight coming through the window. Otherwise it’s well lit. Good work.