@fide you captured the essence of the mimic perfectly, where’s my sword when I need it?! 😛
I think it would look great if the base of the teeth have some build up grime on it. You know, from eating hollows and never brushing his teeth 😉
I do think your right about the bump on the sword I think it is a bit too strong.
Also, something to try out, I love your jumping chest composition! But I think it would look better if the chest is on the left side of the picture. Because it’s ‘looking’ to it’s right so giving it some room to look usually gives it a bit of breathing room and guides the viewers eyes better, usually that results in a more pleasing picture. At least that’s my experience from when I did a lot of photography. All up to you of course if you like it on the right that’s perfectly fine too 😊
