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Kent Trammell
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    @ullreym What a style in Tom’s work. One that you’ve achieved quite closely. You never skim on the details and one of the key characteristic of this style is fine details – nice work.

    One note I have is that the face feels too flat imo. I’d recommend rounding out the face by bring the eyes backward a bit (less backward on the inner part of the eyes, more on the outer part) and same for the cheeks/corner of the mouth. Bringing those parts back should round out the face nicely.

    My other note is the “bell-bottmed” nature of the arms and legs: Narrow at the shoulders/hips and growing as they approach the hands/feet. That’s a pretty prominent real turtle feature and it seems like Tom emphasized that in the art. I’d love to see that implemented in your sculpt. You mentioned the hands and feet should be larger – perhaps you’re already aware of this.

    Overall though it’s an easy A in my book 👏