Hello @voxteldrake,
when looking at the face of your shark in front view it seems like the snout is to low. In the artwork the tip of it is as high as the eyebrows:
Maybe make the lower jaw a little thinner, but I guess the rest of the front view is up to you since there is no front reference.Is that what you mean? Are there any special thoughts of yours about this?
Greetings,
tobles