Yeah I also agree with the above!
One thing I notice, when you switch from one helmet to the next, a short fade out and fade in transition (0.5 seconds?) would be better than just a sudden change.
Same again when switching to the shot of both.
The only other critique is the second (blue) helmet single shot is closer to the camera, personally I think the framing should be the same.
These are just little details, following your efforts and troubleshooting in the forum, you stuck with it and the result is an awesome reward.
Excellent work.
You may find these courses helpful to polish it a little more…
Directing the camera
Animation Bootcamp – In chapter 5 in particular there are some lessons on anticipation with translation and scale, plus some exercises, Wayne demonstrates these with motion graphics examples. This could help make the logos a little more dynamic.
The VFX I think are perfect for the animation.
Thanks for sharing your work, all in…
I think it is awesome. I❤️it.
