Hey there,
I think you did a good job in general. Nice work on the muscles and overall smooth looking sculpt.
The body itself reads a bit too masculine for me. The shoulders are too broad, they usually line up with the widest part of the thighs. The hip you sculpted is that of a male. Female hips are broader and not so high in comparisson.
Just take a look at some female body references and you are good to go!

