Reply To: BC4-1810 Homework, Simon Buz

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Kent Trammell
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    @svetimas First of all, nice job on week 1 homework! It definitely counts. My only note is that the night time lamps are a little too strong imo. I’d love to see some bluish shadows/darkness in the room. Currently the whole room is lit up in a bright orangy-yellow. I like that color but it shouldn’t be powerful enough to make the scene monochromatic. Still it’s an A for week 1 👍

    Now how about that carbon fiber! It looks so good; so crispy and sharp. It’s an excellent effect. Car paint looks good too. Love the leather material on the interior though I think the pattern could be shrunk a little bit; scale seems a touch too large. I like the effort to add scratch wear on the rims. But I think it’s too strong. Rather than big gashes, I would try to tone it down in color and bump so it’s a little more subtle.

    Really nice work though. An A from me!

    Are you planning to do the light match exercise?