@cthulusan I like that you chose a unique room. And it generally reads quite realistic. It certainly reminds me of a teenager’s room. The biggest note I have goes along with what I talked about during the stream: That realism doesn’t necessarily result in interesting. While your room looks believable as a common bedroom, common bedrooms aren’t terribly impressive or memorable. I’m getting the stream uploaded as I type this and I recommend checking it out (if you didn’t see it live) for more info on that concept.
In the end for realism and effort it’s an A, appeal C, a B as a compromise. I know a week is not a long time to do this and I hope the critique doesn’t come across as overly harsh.
Your light match is very close! Not much to say in terms of critique – It’s a solid A from me 👏
