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silentheart00
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    Nice Melvin!  He’s got some personality there.  The bent leg is a touch longer than the other, the fist would use some sharper creases, maybe a tighter wrist to help that thumb form.  The bent leg is also part of the bottom; there’s no delineation, if that makes sense.  The hand making the \m/ has thick fingers, so maybe they could be thinned a little to better fit the proportions of the “m”.  The thumb is also really awkward.  If you make the same symbol with with your own hand, you’ll find the thumb pulls forward into the palm instead of staying at the side.  I like the personal touch.  Keep going!